be patient I am getting to the point ([info]airgiodslv) wrote,

LWP: Bitter Pill

This story is a part of the Lotrips Web Project. Please remix/rewrite/reshape as desired, and credit the author of the story you remixed for inspiration. Post the new story in your journal with this message in the headers, and drop a hyperlink here when you are finished.

Title: Bitter Pill
Pairing: Elijah/Karl/Orlando
Rating: R
Disclaimer: This is a complete work of fiction; no disrespect intended.
Notes: A remix/continuation of Careful What You Wish For by [info]azewewish




It had never gone farther than dancing.

There had been other times, of course, other places, when one or the other of them would slide suggestively past him in a room that just wasn’t that small, or would find some excuse to touch him, a brush of fingers over his hand or a hard, muscled chest pressed all-too-briefly against his.

And there had been other dances, with Karl behind him, guiding his hips, or Orlando grinning at him, fingers tangled in Elijah’s belt loops. They had even caught him between them, once, sandwiching him in heat and strength, raw, unfettered sexuality pouring over him until he could no longer think beyond the next whisper of contact on his skin.

Dom had saved him that night. Dom wouldn’t save him tonight.

Dom was caught up in the redhead at the bar, who had been returning his glances all night, and Elijah knew that as long as Dom was on the pull, nothing else mattered. Nobody else at the table even raised an eyebrow when Karl dragged him onto the dance floor. There was no hope of rescue, then, and the way Orlando and Karl had shared looks and touches left little question in Elijah’s mind.

Tonight, it would go farther than dancing.

Karl danced like a panther, one of the big cats, stalking and hypnotizing with every grind of his hips, gaze locked with Elijah’s. No escape. And there’s no question of Karl’s intentions now; what they’re doing now isn’t dancing so much as vertical foreplay, especially when Karl lowers his head and breaks eye contact long enough to press a hot, open-mouthed kiss against the base of Elijah’s throat, right in the curve between neck and shoulder. Elijah shudders, hips jerking involuntarily against Karl’s, and closes his eyes.

But not before he sees Orlando over Karl’s shoulder, attempting to coax Liv out onto the other side of the dance floor, laughing at something she’s said.

Orlando had always been the one Elijah wanted. But Orlando was Karl’s, so after the first few fumbled attempts at catching Orlando’s attention, Elijah had backed off and admitted defeat. He still wanted Orlando, of course, he was just quieter about it.

Karl had noticed. And exploited.

Karl was a force to be reckoned with at the best of times, but when he was like this, there was no denying him. And once the game of cat-and-mouse had started, Elijah hadn’t wanted to. Karl was attractive enough on his own – and he knew it – but coupled with the promise of Orlando, he was nearly impossible to resist.

Except that Elijah knew how the night would end as well as they did, and he didn’t want it on their terms. The scene had played itself out a hundred times in his head, a hundred late-night fantasies when jerking off became the only way for Elijah to relax and get some sleep after a full day of their attentions. There were dozens of variations, but only one ending.

They would fuck him. One after the other, taking turns holding him down, not letting him come until they were both sated. Or Karl would fuck him until he came and then devote himself to Orlando, with Elijah unraveled and wanting what he couldn’t have. Or Karl would give him to Orlando as a gift, and it would be perfect until it ended, until Orlando spent himself inside Elijah and Karl reclaimed what was his…because Orlando was, without question. And Elijah would watch Orlando come undone beneath Karl’s lips, hands, cock, and he would want just as badly as before.

Any way it happened, it would end with them together, and with him left alone and wanting more. He’s a toy for them, an amusing plaything that they’ll enjoy once for the novelty and then cast aside.

Karl’s lips travel up his throat, one of his hands sliding down to curve around Elijah’s ass and pull him tighter against the bulge between Karl’s legs. Elijah moans before he can stop himself, a short, plaintive cry that sounds embarrassingly like a plea for more. Someone presses against his back, arms encircling him and rubbing over his stomach, and Elijah doesn’t need to open his eyes to know who it is, or where Karl is looking now, with his hand trapped between Elijah’s ass and Orlando’s hips.

Elijah doesn’t want it like this.

But he won’t say no.

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[info]bunniewabbit

September 17 2004, 18:06:25 UTC 7 years ago

Oooh, excellent! Nicely done.

I'm watching these, hoping that I'll be inspired. But it's fun to just read them, too.

[info]airgiodslv

September 17 2004, 19:09:34 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you! Oh, and I hope you are!!

We'll have to see about steering them back the hobbits, yeah? *winks*

[info]acari

September 17 2004, 18:23:55 UTC 7 years ago

Gah. Um, must pull brain together to do a remix myself. But just so you know.

This - Dom was caught up in the redhead at the bar - had me spitting my drink across the desk. Bwahaha!

[info]airgiodslv

September 17 2004, 19:10:29 UTC 7 years ago

Yay!! Thank you so much! I can't wait 'til one catches your eye!

*blows kisses*

[info]acari

September 18 2004, 19:52:46 UTC 7 years ago

Yay! Dee just gave me an idea.

*curls up in bed with her notebook*

[info]impasto

September 17 2004, 20:03:19 UTC 7 years ago

Meep!

Only you could make me read man-fic and enjoy it, love. But I do indeed. And oh, it made my heart ache just a little bit...there are shades of Korean!Orlando here in your Elijah, and oh. *cuddles*

[info]airgiodslv

September 17 2004, 22:41:06 UTC 7 years ago

Man-fic, bwahahaha!!!

Well, this was kind of a compromise for the lovely Brenda, because I knew she would want some Karl, and she was kind enough to offer up Elijah. *molests*

And hey, I never thought about that. But then, you are the one channeling him. I do believe you might be right. *nuzzles*

Thank you for the comments!

[info]phoenixdeluxe

September 17 2004, 22:17:39 UTC 7 years ago

You write the best threesomes ever. I don't just mean that sex-wise, either. You establish the dynamics between the characters so well.

[info]airgiodslv

September 17 2004, 22:44:08 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, wow! I totally don't deserve that compliment, but I am incredibly flattered and touched by it. That is one of the most incredible things anyone has ever said about my writing. Thank you, so much! <333

[info]arabia764

September 18 2004, 02:31:30 UTC 7 years ago

That's really quite disturbing and very sad. I felt deeply sorry for Elijah at the end and desperately wanted *someone* to rescue him.

Nicely done.

[info]airgiodslv

September 18 2004, 13:30:44 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, really? That's interesting. I angsted for him a bit too, but I think that if he was rescued, he would feel regret as well as relief. I mean, there's a reason he keeps letting this happen. On some level, he does want it. Otherwise he would just say 'no, cut it out, I'm not into this.' He's going to hurt afterwards, but he's still the one letting it happen.

[info]arabia764

September 18 2004, 13:37:39 UTC 7 years ago

Yeah, I can see that. It's HIS fault if he allows himself to get hurt but still... I want someone to protect him if he won't do it himself!

[info]airgiodslv

September 18 2004, 14:06:01 UTC 7 years ago

I know, me too!

But have no fear, 'tis my turn to remix next. *g*

[info]arabia764

September 18 2004, 14:06:50 UTC 7 years ago

Oh go on. Make Elijah happy.
:-)

[info]airgiodslv

September 18 2004, 14:07:53 UTC 7 years ago

*winks*

[info]airgiodslv

September 18 2004, 14:07:26 UTC 7 years ago

P.S. If you really want someone to rescue him, you can totally jump in, have Dom wake up from the redhead and get his butt involved. *g*

[info]arabia764

September 18 2004, 14:09:08 UTC 7 years ago

Can't Orlando come to his senses and realise who he was really made for?

Thought not.

[info]airgiodslv

September 18 2004, 14:13:53 UTC 7 years ago

It would be your remix, sugarplum. Do whatever you want with them! *grins*

[info]arabia764

September 18 2004, 14:15:36 UTC 7 years ago

Now there's a thought... and I do like being called Sugarplum.

:-)

[info]airgiodslv

September 18 2004, 14:21:03 UTC 7 years ago

*cheers you on*

Sugarplum! *winks and blows kisses*

[info]arabia764

September 18 2004, 14:20:57 UTC 7 years ago

Now there's a thought.... and I do like being called Sugarplum.

:-)

[info]azewewish

September 18 2004, 17:53:31 UTC 7 years ago

Can't change the ending. It's one of the rules of the remix. But...you could get into Orlando's head, yes. If you wanted.

[info]cupiscent

September 18 2004, 05:23:12 UTC 7 years ago

Alright, in order to fully appreciate where I'm coming from here, you probably need to imagine me as some sort of bad fantasy movie sorceress villain, running long fingernails over the concepts of this little morsel, and probably running a forked tongue over sharp teeth.

This is what your project does to me. Reveals my true nature.

And this part is delicious in itself, and doubly so in the dark cracks I can get my claws into. I have such an urge to laugh evilly. Actually out loud.

*draws Karl off into a dark corner*

*hesitates a moment*

*takes Dom too*

[info]airgiodslv

September 18 2004, 13:35:16 UTC 7 years ago

I may be a little bit turned on by your sorceress-self, m'love. Thank you for the response and the mental image. *g*

And I desperately want to know what you have planned with Karl and Dom. Desperately. Because that's just...enough to make my head spin. You and dark cracks, nnyugh.

*wibbles*
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